My six are from Creepy Hollow #2 (which has a name, but I have not yet shared it ;-) ).
Flint stands in the doorway.
“Have you been roped in as part of the cheering up committee?” I ask him.
Tora’s blonde and green head appears over her brother’s shoulder. “I thought I’d need extra help pulling you from the depths of despair.” She looks me up and down. “But, surprisingly, you seem fine.”
11 comments:
Intriguing! Green and blonde hair? Makes you want to know why someone needs cheering up. Nice sample.
Yep, just enough detail to make me curious :-)
Intriguing 6! I agree with Elaine
Intriguing and interesting!
Good use of description - green and blonde hair, makes me want to know more about that character.
Very good!
Michelle :)
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Not only intriguing, but fun!! I really like this!
Must wonder, is she fine? I'm thinking no.:)
Thanks for signing up to do the Valentine's day bloghop! I look forward to reading your scene :)
Bet she still needs cheering up, though. Intriguing snippet!
Great how in even such a short excerpt, I get a sense of the characters. Tora seems fun. :D
Gotta figure out why he's down in the dumps. I like the imagery!
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