Sunday, February 12, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday (6)

Hop on over to the Six Sentence Sunday website to check out the other participants' "sixes".

My six are from Creepy Hollow #2 (which has a name, but I have not yet shared it ;-) ).


Flint stands in the doorway. 
“Have you been roped in as part of the cheering up committee?” I ask him. 
Tora’s blonde and green head appears over her brother’s shoulder. “I thought I’d need extra help pulling you from the depths of despair.” She looks me up and down. “But, surprisingly, you seem fine.”






11 comments:

Elaine Cantrell said...

Intriguing! Green and blonde hair? Makes you want to know why someone needs cheering up. Nice sample.

Sarah Tokeley said...

Yep, just enough detail to make me curious :-)

Anonymous said...

Intriguing 6! I agree with Elaine

Nas said...

Intriguing and interesting!

Unknown said...

Good use of description - green and blonde hair, makes me want to know more about that character.

Very good!

Michelle :)
www.michelle-pickett.com/blog

JoAnn Ross said...

Not only intriguing, but fun!! I really like this!

Unknown said...

Must wonder, is she fine? I'm thinking no.:)

Hope Roberson said...

Thanks for signing up to do the Valentine's day bloghop! I look forward to reading your scene :)

Unknown said...

Bet she still needs cheering up, though. Intriguing snippet!

Morgan said...

Great how in even such a short excerpt, I get a sense of the characters. Tora seems fun. :D

Nick Kelly said...

Gotta figure out why he's down in the dumps. I like the imagery!