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"I'll make sure Tora knows about this," he says as he steps through the doorway. "You know, just in case you forget to mention it to her." The air closes up behind him.
Great, great, great. I wish I was still at the age where having a tantrum would be acceptable. I've never known anyone to mess up an assignment this badly and I'm pretty sure it's not even my fault.
8 comments:
Ooooh, what does this come from?
My first visit to your blog! I'm very intrigued by this! I love this line: "I wish I was still at the age where having a tantrum would be acceptable." Great six!
I love the voice of this snippet! Very nice. Another YA author here, saluting! :)
What assignment? How was it messed up? Intriguing snippet with a great voice!
J.C.
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My first visit to your blog, too - and I loved your contribution to SSS. What type of story is this from?
Thanks for your encouraging comments :-) These sentences are from a YA fantasy.
Now we're curious. What assignment got messed up?
I like the young voice you've got going on in this :)
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