Sunday, July 1, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: The trees continue to spin...

This week's Six Sentence Sunday comes from the fourth installment in the Creepy Hollow series, MASQUERADE. Hope you like!


The trees continue to spin. Pain starts to fade into a strange numbness. I raise a shaking hand to my face and feel a whole lot of stickiness running down my cheek. If I could touch the back of my head, I’d probably find blood there as well. I’m too terrified to put my hands anywhere near my stomach; I know the damage is bad. Is it bad enough that my body won’t be able to heal itself before it ... shuts down?




7 comments:

M.L. Falconer said...

Intense emotional description, Rachel. Great Six!

Golden Eagle said...

That is certainly a suspenseful scene!

S.A. Larsenッ said...

Oh, I feel for this character! Nicely done. ;D

Brooke R. Busse said...

I so want that to be the image for your fourth cover. 0-0 Though I know it will be a person and it will still be awesome. No matter what.

Anonymous said...

Fantastic six! Can't wait to read more. Brilliant as always.

Anonymous said...

That sounds like another great excerpt. I have lots of catching up to do. x

Cally Jackson said...

Argh! Awesome teaser! Can't wait to get my hands on Masquerade. :-)